Monday, October 8, 2012

search is mine only?

ek soch liye dil mein fir chali mein
yu soch soch ker ,dil masojj ker
kabh muskan liye,kabhi liye dil mein kashmakash.
fir chali mein aapni rahonn mein madhoshh ,liye dil mein ek nayii  hasraattt

koi khaas hai vo , meri aagaaz hai vo
aur kya kahun mein meri tanha ratoon kaa ek saath hai vo
dhundhun mein usko,usko idhar udhar
kabhi paaya khoya sa lagta hai
mera AAKkkss mujhe khoyaa saa lagtaa haii

dhundhun mein aab usko,kya sirf mein hi hun iss dagaaar pe ya tu bhi mere saath hai????

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11 comments:

  1. UnknownOctober 9, 2012 at 8:31 AM

    Very Nice!!!

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  2. UnknownOctober 9, 2012 at 8:49 AM

    its awesome.. and i must say your hindi vocabulary is really good.. kuch kuch words k toh sahi se matlab bhi nahi pata mjhe.. but i have still understood what you wanted to highlight through this awesome piece of work of yours..:) really nice..

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  3. UnknownOctober 9, 2012 at 9:24 AM

    I really liked the way you have expressed the feelings in the words.. Keep up the good work!!

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  4. UnknownOctober 9, 2012 at 9:28 AM

    great !!!! gd efforts ... hoping to see your next piece of talent very soon ,,, all the best

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  5. UnknownOctober 9, 2012 at 9:30 AM

    Well written..! keep up the good work :)

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  6. UnknownOctober 9, 2012 at 9:31 AM

    yaar tu to M.A kar rhe h
    udhar alfaaz sikha rhe h kya???

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  7. UnknownOctober 9, 2012 at 9:40 AM

    this part is too awsome !!
    "koi khaas hai vo , meri aagaaz hai vo
    aur kya kahun mein meri tanha ratoon kaa ek saath hai vo
    dhundhun mein usko,usko idhar udhar
    kabhi paaya khoya sa lagta hai
    mera AAKkkss mujhe khoyaa saa lagtaa haii"

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  8. UnknownOctober 13, 2012 at 5:18 AM

    Just one thought after reading this,

    MAIN " AKELA '" HI CHALTA RAHA RAHE MANZIL MAGAR
    LOG MILTE GAYE AUR KARWAN BANTA GAYA

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  9. UnknownOctober 13, 2012 at 5:34 AM

    awesome is the word....:)

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  10. KalyaniOctober 15, 2012 at 10:43 AM

    great!something that all of us can relate to!:)

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  11. VasudhaOctober 29, 2012 at 6:25 AM

    Great yaar..and i agree with shubham, ur vocabulary is very good :-)

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